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Pretty and perfect,
can do nothing wrong.
Bakes cakes and cookies
all the day long.
Pretty and perfect,
helps all in need.
Knows when to show,
does every good deed.
Pretty and perfect,
with muscles and all.
So everybody stares
as she walks down the halls.
Pretty and perfect,
the world in her hand.
Everyone loves her
(and she's beautifully tanned).
Pretty and perfect,
without any flaws.
Never will break
any one of the laws.
Pretty and perfect,
can make no mistake.
So loved and wanted.
So...fake.
can do nothing wrong.
Bakes cakes and cookies
all the day long.
Pretty and perfect,
helps all in need.
Knows when to show,
does every good deed.
Pretty and perfect,
with muscles and all.
So everybody stares
as she walks down the halls.
Pretty and perfect,
the world in her hand.
Everyone loves her
(and she's beautifully tanned).
Pretty and perfect,
without any flaws.
Never will break
any one of the laws.
Pretty and perfect,
can make no mistake.
So loved and wanted.
So...fake.
Yeah, I know. It's predictable. The rhyming is forced. Give me a break; I was 13 when I wrote this. All of my friends (at nerd camp, this is) loved it and said it was great, and at that age, it probably sounded that way. Now, however, not so much.
Critique is okay, but not really wanted. I'm keeping this less for it being something I like and more for memory's sake.
Critique is okay, but not really wanted. I'm keeping this less for it being something I like and more for memory's sake.
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