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abort.

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do as androids do.

the monotonous days of
automatons is what you
seek, yes?

take me with you.

you will find it in the dreams
of robots. you can grapple the
bedtime hopes and caramel clouds.

take me with you.

try, try again, as they say
(and you always do as they say,
as they program).

find, find another
(and you always will, always left
still wanting more).

abort! abort!
Written: April 27, 2009.

Comments/critique would be nice.
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SNIDE-uk's avatar
I Like this, I'm usually not one for writings and such but this "the monotonous days of automatons is what you
seek, yes?" Just grabbed me for some reason. Bravo.

Comes across as a message of rutine to me, Programed to do the same things day in day out, and looking for some companion who will share but not interupt that rutine but being scared to venture to find them.

I could be way off base, as i said The written word isn't my usuall thing. :)