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XVIII.
(P.S.)

I wish I didn't, but I still
think of you.

I still remember
your details, and I
miss them.

Why couldn't you listen to her?


Why didn't take the chance that
I did?

I hope that you will
tell me.

Someday,
any day.

Give up your silence and I will
give you mine.
FINAL ONE. Finally.

I'm posting the various short poems from an autobiographical project I did last semester. They aren't amazing because I (admittedly) didn't take a lot of time on them. I'll include the description from some of them (since we had to explain them as well), but for some, I'd rather not since they are very personal.

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ThermadorianGrey Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2011
I looked over the rest of them and you were right, most of them were stronger than the one I critiqued previously. Just an interesting sidenote, I don't see a XIV or XV (fourteen or fifteen) on here. There a reason for that?
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neoshayna888 Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2011
Thank you. I'm glad you liked some of the other ones. I actually had to stop after the thirteenth because of a lack of time, to be honest. I wish I could have done more, but there will probably never a be a fourteenth or fifteenth, unless I decide to add on as time goes by or something. :P
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ThermadorianGrey Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2011
XVIII means 18 -P
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neoshayna888 Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2011
Oh, wow. It's been a long day (well, a long week thus far, actually) and I wasn't paying enough attention. :P Sorry about that.

Anyways, I think you may have just missed them because they are there.

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